If I could go back in time to one event
If I could go back in time I would go back to Room 4 because it was the funniest year of my school life and it was the craziest. Also, I made A LOT of mistakes so then I can fix them and never think anything of them ever again!
Hello Clara!
ReplyDeleteI like how you really made the A LOT stand out.
Next time maybe list a few of your "mistakes."
honestly if I could go back in time I would go back to Room 2 because then I was offered the chance to move up a class or stay with my friends in room 2 and I choose to stay in room 2 with my friends and now that i look back at it, I wish I choose to move up but you never know how that might have an impact on who you are now.
Thanks Jemma.
Hi Jemma!It's Clara, Thank you for your feedback!I will make sure that I have no mistakes next time!Thanks for your amazing example! Cheers Clara
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Alyssa I am from St Patricks School Greymouth.
Next time you could make the writing into a paragraph and add more detail.
If I went back in time I would do this...
One time me and my brother went busking in Auckland city, We went to a lot of places and asked if we could go busking out side of their stores but most of the people said no until we got to pizza hut and asked if we could busk he said yes. He came outside where me and my brother were singing and in his hand was a hole bunch of money he said do we need to pay you I said no. Im glad I said no but also sad.
Keep up the good work,
Alyssa
Hi Alyssa It's Clara from Paroa School. Thank you for your feed back! I will definitely make sure my blog post will be up to standard!
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