Hi my name is Fern and I go to Mangonui School in Far North. I like your work, it's good but in your reflection it would be better if the w for the we is by the e.
Hi my name is Olive I go to Mangonui and I always ask myself the same Question. Where in the world is my lunch from? Next time put more info and edit your work.
Hello my name is Brendon I'm 9. Next time you could add more details to your work. Did you think about adding a bigger refection? I enjoy the cool photo you put on your work. How come you just put a picture on your writing? What is your favourite type of food?
Hi my name is Fern and I go to Mangonui School in Far North. I like your work, it's good but in your reflection it would be better if the w for the we is by the e.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Olive I go to Mangonui and I always ask myself the same Question. Where in the world is my lunch from? Next time put more info and edit your work.
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ReplyDeletehi my name is porsha and I'm from Mangonui School. i enjoined the facts about your lunch post
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Brendon I'm 9. Next time you could add more details to your work. Did you think about adding a bigger refection? I enjoy the cool photo you put on your work. How come you just put a picture on your writing? What is your favourite type of food?
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