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My weekend.
On Monday 24th I Payton, Keton and Kolton went up to my Grandad’s farm we went over to the hut we put in the last row of carpet then we went into town we bort a lux a rubbish bin candy, chocolate, chips and all those nice sweets we got sugar, milo, and tea. Then we put in our camping bunks and fold out couches it is like a mini B&B all need to get the power done and put the lights in. Then it will be our nice hut. You could have breakfast because there is cereal there is a sink with a tap and all that stuff it is really cool!!!
By Quaid
On Monday 24th I Payton, Keton and Kolton went up to my Grandad’s farm we went over to the hut we put in the last row of carpet then we went into town we bort a lux a rubbish bin candy, chocolate, chips and all those nice sweets we got sugar, milo, and tea. Then we put in our camping bunks and fold out couches it is like a mini B&B all need to get the power done and put the lights in. Then it will be our nice hut. You could have breakfast because there is cereal there is a sink with a tap and all that stuff it is really cool!!!
By Quaid
kia ora my name is unique i liked the part when you talked about when you went up to your Grandad’s farm did you think about making the writing a bit bigger.
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well done
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